Delicate dew drips down--
Daffodil drinks
Diamonds dot dales
Dust dampens, demanding docility:
Delicious day.
What do you think, alliterative success, or just litter?
No, Alobar - back to the drawing board or should I say...
Definitely deleterious, demanding dynamited destruction.
Dew doesn't drip
Diamonds don't dot dales
Dust doesn't dampen
Reply:This is interesting
A poem with words that are strictly ds
This is not litter.
but I never seen a poem like this till now.
Reply:Delightful. Full circle too. Demanding docility....a nice effect painted with that.
Reply:Duodenally deleterious.
Reply:Drat! Didn't dream descending diamond drops dot dates.
Reply:dexterously delivered.
Reply:This is not one of your best poems, but you do have the alliteration solid.
Tori
Reply:(Dragnet theme.) Da, de, da...da.
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