Wednesday, May 19, 2010

What do you think, alliterative success, or just litter?

Delicate dew drips down--


Daffodil drinks


Diamonds dot dales


Dust dampens, demanding docility:


Delicious day.

What do you think, alliterative success, or just litter?
No, Alobar - back to the drawing board or should I say...





Definitely deleterious, demanding dynamited destruction.


Dew doesn't drip


Diamonds don't dot dales


Dust doesn't dampen
Reply:This is interesting


A poem with words that are strictly ds


This is not litter.


but I never seen a poem like this till now.
Reply:Delightful. Full circle too. Demanding docility....a nice effect painted with that.
Reply:Duodenally deleterious.
Reply:Drat! Didn't dream descending diamond drops dot dates.
Reply:dexterously delivered.
Reply:This is not one of your best poems, but you do have the alliteration solid.


Tori
Reply:(Dragnet theme.) Da, de, da...da.

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